Talk:Crinoid/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: I'll have a go at this. Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 11:47, 8 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking up this review. I will get to it tomorrow. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:20, 8 April 2019 (UTC)

Comments

 * Since the 'Picture galleries' are all of 'Fossil Crinoids', perhaps the headings could be merged.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * I think each fossil image should have both age/geological period and locality in its caption.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Still some left, and one is called a "fossile".
 * Done now. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:54, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * The Evolution section doesn't quite say that crinoids form a clade; the Taxonomy section agrees there's just one class but doesn't show it as the base of the tree (at the top!).
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * The Wright et al "rank-based classification" should be represented as a cladogram. This could then be illustrated with small images from (and replacing) the 'Gallery of the current families'.
 * I can't do cladograms. See below. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * OK, I've done it. It's actually not difficult if you do it a little bit at a time, just looks that way! Would be a useful skill...
 * Thanks! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:54, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * The labels of the 'Gallery of the current families' says things like "An Antedonidae", but the family names are all plural. We normally says "An Antedonid" (etc). I guess this means writing Antedonid, or alternatively dropping the "A/An" and just saying "(Antedonidae)".
 * See below. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * We rather need a simple labelled diagram of the basic anatomy.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Etymology ought to show the Greek words in Greek text.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * One left.
 * The source I used did not have the Greek text. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:54, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Predation: wikilink predator; and I think the first paragraph could be copy-edited down a bit.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)


 * In culture should say that St Cuthbert's beads were so named in the middle ages.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Crinoids are very photogenic. I think the article has far too many images and I would like to get rid of the main gallery and some of the images in the Morphology section. If we had a cladogram, we could retain many of these images at thumbnail size, but as mentioned above, cladograms are beyond my level of competence. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:19, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Ah... I see... Sorted.
 * Well, thank you. That is a great improvement. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:54, 9 April 2019 (UTC)