Talk:Cristóbal Martínez

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jjone051. Peer reviewers: Alondrafigueroa6.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:36, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

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I am not completely sure, but for the headings of your sandbox can you change the headings to be something besides the headings that were given to us? I’m not completely sure, therefore I am not saying change them, but I would suggest you ask our TA or professor just in case. Also I notice you have little biography on him. It is important we incorporate their birthday, place of birth, tribes or clans they are associated with, and anything important that can pertain to their childhood(if possible). I think most of what you have under your “Becoming Cristobal Martinez '' header belongs in education(if you decide to header your article differently). If you decide to header everything according to the template, the Radio Healer header and everything within it should be below the header “biography”. I believe the section where you discuss his artwork is perfect, you give very good descriptions of his art and what the style of his art consists of. If possible add onto “How The Lights Get In 2019”. Also, make sure you have three artworks instead of two and make sure you are able to elaborate on them like you did with the first artwork you described. Make sure you create headlines for the References, See also, and External links to make your page look more organized. Overall the content of your page is fine, just add more information in the biography and in his artworks. Also make sure to check your outline and make it sharp to ensure the best grade you can get. Hope this helped you, Goodluck!