Talk:Cristina Fontanelli

Close paraphrasing, lack of independent references, and promotional tone
Currently reviewing article to conform wikipedia articles of style and placing /refs. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.51.203.4 (talk • contribs) 15:13, 20 August 2009

Article was taken from subject's web page with permission. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.51.203.4 (talk) 13:48, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Article was re-written. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.51.203.4 (talk) 16:18, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Please see Close paraphrasing. Changing words here and there is not enough to get around copyright issues. Hairhorn (talk) 19:39, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Page is being further re-written. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 65.51.203.4 (talk • contribs) 20:37, 21 August 2009


 * This page has not been "re-written". It is still full of close paraphrasing. Please read the link above. To 65.51.203.4/User:Georgewienbarg, do not remove the close paraphrasing notice from the article until it has been completely re-written to conform to the required standards. Note also that I have edited this article to remove the hype and "PR-speak", but the basic close paraphrasing remains. Note also that the material lifted from http://www.cristinafontanelli.com/bio.html cannot be "used with permission" simply by stating so on this talk page. The proper procedures must be followed followed. See Requesting copyright permission for instructions. Even then, its promotional, unreferenced, and unencyclopedic style and organization would be unsuitable and require heavy editing. Voceditenore (talk) 07:58, 28 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Stubbed: I've restored the article to a prior revision that did not infringe copyright, since the permission did not materialise. – Toon 22:15, 17 November 2009 (UTC)