Talk:Croatian Republican Peasant Party (1945)

Notes on copyedit
I just had a look at the copyedits you made and I'm very happy with the improvements. Thank you very much!--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:22, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "the national liberation movement led and dominated by the Communist Party of Yugoslavia (Komunistička partija Jugoslavije, KPJ) and by its branch in Croatia – the Communist Party of Croatia (Komunistička partija Hrvatske, KPH)." 2 issues here: 1) "national liberation movement" can be a loaded term, is there a more neutral one that can be used (for example, Yugoslav resistance)? 2) Is this a Croatian or Yugoslav national liberation movement? The sentence almost seems to imply that KPH "led and dominated" the Yugoslav resistance.
 * Yugoslav resistance. Although it is a bit complicated because while the resistance was without doubt primarily led by the KPJ, the party had two branches established before the war (in 1937 if I remember correctly) in Slovenia and Croatia (as undefined territories, as neither Slovenia nor Croatia were territorially defined or established polities/administrative units etc. established at the time) and the KPS/KPH were put in charge of resistance movements in territories roughly corresponding with what later became people's republic of Slovenia and PR Croatia respecitvely. I agree the NLM may be a loaded term - changed now.--Tomobe03 (talk) 08:29, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "soon came into conflict over policies pursued by the two" needs to be more specific about what caused the conflict
 * Explained by summarising the prose on this matter.--Tomobe03 (talk) 08:29, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "Axis invasion of Yugoslavia" I would try to reduce the detail of this section a bit and add some very basic background on the HSS, such as its founding and basic political orientation. It would be interesting to know if the wartime split was presaged by preexisting tensions or factions in the party. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  01:09, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
 * I have prepared a section containing background information on the HSS from its formation until 1939, but then realised it is about 1000 words long - or about twice the size of the corresponding section(s) of the Croatian Peasant Party article. So I posted the material over there instead and I'll try to summarise it further in this article.--Tomobe03 (talk) 14:30, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree 1,000 words is probably too long, but maybe we could get a couple sentences, something like "The Croatian Peasant Party was founded in XX year by Y and Z. [A sentence about its main ideology and goals]"? (t &#183; c)  buidhe  08:48, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry, thought I'd quickly wrap up another issue elsewhere, something came up in the meantime. I added a couple of passages now (about 200 words).--Tomobe03 (talk) 09:19, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "which maintained its position that the HSS does not need to establish any further formal structure before the war is over" Is that the HSS exec committee position or the KPJ position? (t &#183; c)  buidhe  00:54, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Well, both. In later stages of the war the exec committee operated as a de facto satellite of the KPH (and the HRSS continued this after the war).--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:15, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "Maček loyalists are present elsewhere pursuing hostile agenda" I'm not sure what this is trying to mean. Where is "elsewhere"? What is the "hostile agenda"? (t &#183; c)  buidhe  01:09, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
 * By "elsewhere" I meant in committees not under direct control of KPH/KPJ members. The "hostile agenda" was never exactly specified. I adjusted this sentence and the one referred to above. Could you please have another look at them?--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:15, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's better. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  14:21, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
 * You're welcome! (t &#183; c)  buidhe  14:21, 21 April 2021 (UTC)