Talk:Crocker Highlands, Oakland, California

Puffery
Prior to the most recent edit I made, the article read, to me, like an advertisement. In line with how I currently understand WP:PROMOTION, I removed a fair amount of what I considered to be puffery. I'd be curious to know if other people arrived at a different conclusion. Stussll (talk) 09:20, 5 September 2020 (UTC)