Talk:Cromwell's Castle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nick-D (talk · contribs) 03:05, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

Comments
Great work as usual with this article. I only have some minor comments:
 * "the Isles had been Royalist supporters" - this sounds a bit odd (eg, that the islands were supporting the Royalists) - perhaps tweak it to something like "the leaders of the Isles were supporters of..."?
 * "made from massive pieces of rubble" - was the rubble from a previous construction, or was this local rock?
 * It might be worth noting that the castle is, according to English Heritage, one of "few surviving Cromwellian fortifications in Britain" Nick-D (talk) 03:14, 31 August 2016 (UTC)


 * Cheers! Changes made as suggested. Hchc2009 (talk) 19:01, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Those changes look good, and I'm very pleased to pass the nomination. Nick-D (talk) 10:15, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

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