Talk:Crown Jewels of the United Kingdom/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tim riley (talk · contribs) 17:52, 2 October 2017 (UTC)

Beginning first read-through. More shortly.  Tim riley  talk    17:52, 2 October 2017 (UTC)

Review
I have struggled to find anything to quibble about in this splendidly throrough and enjoyable article. The best I can manage is this couple of minor points: And a comment rather than a quibble: reference 149 took me by surprise: I have never seen such a thing before, but it says what needs saying and so seems right. The two small quibbles above are not worth hanging about over, and so I have much pleasure in promoting this admirable article to GA.
 * the numbers for references 74 and 139 should be after the closing brackets of the parentheses, not before them, according to the Manual of Style.
 * in reference 67 I suppose "World World" is a typo for "World War".

Overall summary
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria The article seems to me as a layman to be potentially a candidate for FA, and if you ever take that route I hope you will ping me.  Tim riley  talk    06:55, 3 October 2017 (UTC)
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