Talk:Cruel World

Plot
The plot section is not easy to follow due to the way it was written. Erina Mukuta 09:17, 31 March 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Erinamukuta (talk • contribs)


 * I'm copyediting the article generally; I cut out a lot of what I thought was unnecessarily specific plot information, and removed the cleanup templates. -- MatthewDBA (talk) 16:46, 7 April 2014 (UTC)