Talk:Crybaby (Mariah Carey song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pixelyoshi (discuter) 17:50, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this article Pixelyoshi (discuter) 17:50, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

Background and composition

 * "guitar and guitar"
 * "from the low note of an E3 to the high note of F♯5"
 * Any tempo ?

I will continue tomorrow Pixelyoshi (discuter) 18:25, 17 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed. As for the tempo, I'm afraid not.

Controversy

 * "became the center of conflict..." → "became the center of a conflict..."
 * "The differences in opinion" → "These different opinions" should be better
 * Done.

Reception

 * "wrote that on the song 'Mariah amazes', also calling the song 'Snoop Dogg enhanced'..." overuse of "song"
 * Done.

Live performances

 * Only one performance ? In this case, remove the 's'
 * The song was performed throughout the Rainbow Tour. Should the 's' be removed?

Credits and personnel

 * Could you add more credits from Rainbow (like CTTAMT) ?
 * Done.

FINISH ! On hold for even days Pixelyoshi (discuter) 19:52, 18 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing. Novice7 (talk) 03:45, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, I'm passing it Pixelyoshi (discuter) 10:00, 20 April 2011 (UTC)