Talk:Crystal Heights/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:11, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments Not much to see here, an interesting article, on hold for the moment. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 20:12, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Lead image, I'm really struggling to make much out of that. I think (personally) the image with Wright in the "Design" section is clearer and more interesting.
 * "theater - a diversity" etc, en-dash not hyphen.
 * "land was sold" gradually
 * "$3,000,000" 3 million. And can you inflate that for modern times?
 * "massive $12-$15 million" en-dash.
 * "chosen - bronze" en-dash again.
 * "trees...Screens" non breaking space before ellipsis and regular space after ellipsis.
 * "cancelled" one l in USEng?
 * "buildings are not allowed" are not or were not?
 * "be 110 feet tall instead of 90 feet, " convert.
 * NPCP -> NCPC.
 * "the Washington, D.C. area" comma after D.C.


 * I'm currently bedridden due to a back injury. If you don't mind waiting just a few days, I'll correct the issues you pointed out when I can sit at my computer. Thanks for understanding.  APK  The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 08:18, 14 March 2021 (UTC)APK| whisper in my ear ]] 04:46, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
 * no worries, take your time and get well soon. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 08:18, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your patience. I think all the issues have been resolved.  APK  whisper in my ear  00:54, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries. Can we dial down the "accuracy" of the inflation?  I don't think inflating $3m to the nearest dollar is helpful, perhaps the nearest $0.1m? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 07:22, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Sure thing.  APK  whisper in my ear  02:19, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

All good, promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 14:52, 21 March 2021 (UTC)