Talk:Cuca Roseta/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Whiteguru (talk · contribs) 09:36, 3 March 2021 (UTC)

Starts GA Review; the review will follow the same sections of the Article. --Whiteguru (talk) 09:36, 3 March 2021 (UTC) 

Final

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Reference 2 is a dead link; it loops to a blank page on archive.org (which loops blank)
 * My sense is that English readers are going to be unfamiliar with the concept of fado. It may be useful to include a short explanation in the lede.
 * An overall read is that the lede might include a summary from Television, modelling and commercial appearances, Personal life and her volunteering. As one gets into the article in depth, a much stronger sense of her notability becomes apparent. So the lede might be expanded a bit.
 * Reference 30 is a dead link and goes to a blank page on archive.org
 * Reference 54 goves 'not found'.
 * Lots of research, lots of checking on archive.org. Good work for a first GA submission!
 * Can we go over these issues?       --Whiteguru (talk) 09:50, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
 * My sense is that English readers are going to be unfamiliar with the concept of fado. It may be useful to include a short explanation in the lede.
 * An overall read is that the lede might include a summary from Television, modelling and commercial appearances, Personal life and her volunteering. As one gets into the article in depth, a much stronger sense of her notability becomes apparent. So the lede might be expanded a bit.
 * Reference 30 is a dead link and goes to a blank page on archive.org
 * Reference 54 goves 'not found'.
 * Lots of research, lots of checking on archive.org. Good work for a first GA submission!
 * Can we go over these issues?       --Whiteguru (talk) 09:50, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Hi Whiteguru, thanks again for the review and your encouraging words! See my responses below:


 * Reference 2 is a dead link; it loops to a blank page on archive.org (which loops blank)
 * I did see the blank page but the page came up after refreshing my browser. I changed the archived version to archive.vn, which hopefully works better. ✅


 * My sense is that English readers are going to be unfamiliar with the concept of fado. It may be useful to include a short explanation in the lede.
 * Added. ✅


 * An overall read is that the lede might include a summary from Television, modelling and commercial appearances, Personal life and her volunteering. As one gets into the article in depth, a much stronger sense of her notability becomes apparent. So the lede might be expanded a bit.
 * Expanded lede.
 * This reads much better, now. ✅


 * Reference 30 is a dead link and goes to a blank page on archive.org
 * I see that reference 30 goes to her IMDb page, and the link worked fine. I did change the archive to archive.vn since that seems to work better. However, I also checked reference 29 (about the Grand Prix) and that was broken so changed to a different link. Maybe you were referring to that one? (Yes)
 * Works now with the redirect. ✅


 * Reference 54 gives 'not found'.
 * Also did not see an issue with that link, not sure why. Of course I can change it if it's unreliable. Is that the last reference in the paragraph, about the Porto hospital concert?
 * Works now with the redirect. ✅


 * Additional notes: After another copyediting pass I changed a few small things for example removed italization from Clube de Fado since it is the proper name of a venue. ✅

Alan Islas (talk) 16:27, 6 March 2021 (UTC)


 * That's all the work needed on this article. A good effort for your first GA. --Whiteguru (talk) 19:52, 6 March 2021 (UTC)