Talk:Cullen Old Church

Informal review
General
 * This all looks good to me. A few observations:

Description
 * Phrases like "It is considered to be a fine example", prompt the question - "by whom"? It could also be thought a bit POV. Assuming it's a direct quote, I'd probably just quote it and source it, e.g. "The Pevsner for Aberdeenshire: North and Moray describes it as a fine example...."
 * ✅ Done - I've ascribed it to John R. Hume. (I haven't explained who that is in the lead, since it's in the next section)
 * On this, I don't think MoS suggests italicising quotes as you do for John Hume?
 * ✅ You're right, fixed.
 * What is a birdcage bellcote? Does it combine both functions, or does it just look like a birdcage? The former sounds unlikely, wouldn't the bell disturb the birds? Is it a Scottish thing?
 * ✅ That's how it was described in the source - I assumed it just meant that it was open like a birdcage, but I agree it's a bit jargony so I've just removed the word.
 * Interior
 * A bunch of one/two sentence paragraphs that I'd probably bunch together;
 * ✅ Done.
 * History
 * "the chancel was lengthened when the chapel was raised to a collegiate church[13], one of 38 such churches in Scotland at the time,[11] by Alexander Ogilvy of Findlater, Archdeacon Alexander Dick of Glasgow and Hay's son, John Duff of Muldavit, along with the parishioners of Cullen." - are they doing the "lengthening" or the "raising"? Not clear to me. And the punctuation goes before the cite.
 * ✅ They were doing both - I've split it into two sentences to make it easier to read.
 * List of chaplains and ministers
 * The long list of ministers throws up a copyvio. Not a problem in itself, but they'd be better if sourced to the church document.
 * Apologies - I see it is at the very end. The problem is one is unsure as to whether that covers the whole list, or just the last name. Just as a preference, I'd cite each one, as per the long, dull list of headmasters I did here, Monmouth School. But it's tedious!
 * ✅ Groan - OK, done. Getting RSI from hitting Ctrl+V...

All in all, a very nice addition to the canon. Many congrat.s. KJP1 (talk) 09:31, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for looking at this KJP1, really appreciate the comments. Would you be willing to mark this as patrolled - the log is still empty. Cheers Girth Summit  (blether)  10:01, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Oops, now done. KJP1 (talk) 10:33, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Sorry to be a pain, but I think you just patrolled the talk page rather than the article! Girth Summit  (blether)  10:43, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Sorry - technical issues are not my forte. Let me try to remember how to do NPP. KJP1 (talk) 13:49, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi KJP1, I'm just catching up after being away for the weekend. I do quite a bit of NPP, but since I'm the author the Curation Toolbar doesn't appear when I look at it the article. Assuming you're seeing the toolbar, it should be possible for you to just click the 'tick' button so it turns green, and then click 'Mark as Reviewed'. If the toolbar isn't appearing for you then something might have gone wrong... Girth Summit  (blether)  10:09, 29 April 2019 (UTC)