Talk:Cultural Burning and its Ecological and Cultural Benefits

Peer Review
Hi Cannon,

I have peer reviewed your article but I am not sure if you can see my comments so I will include them here as well.

I am a little confused on your article. There is a brief introduction to the topic but then it goes straight into direct quotes and bullet points. I think the article would be better received if it was written in paragraph format as opposed to by each source. This would allow you to combine the sources and portray it more as an article or story rather than a list of points. It is more engaging for the reader and provides a path to understanding the topic. There is a lot of great and interesting content but most of it is either quotes or bullets from those quotes. Also, if you go back and look through some of your modules, it shows you how to add in citations, so you don't have to explicitly say 'source 1' and it will format it Wiki style. Another quick note, make sure to reread your article as I found a few grammatical errors.

Please let me know if you have any questions!

Sara Avrit Savrit (talk) 21:37, 15 April 2023 (UTC)