Talk:Cyclone Dumazile/GA1

GA Review
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 Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 14:21, 3 July 2021 (UTC)

This article is extremely well-written. However, I did find a handful of minor issues.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 14:21, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * and was named Dumazile the next day as it intensified into a tropical storm. Add a comma after "the next day".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * and in the case of Saint-Gilles was clogged by debris Add a comma after "Saint-Gilles".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * and some flooding occurred in Toamasina as a result of malfunctioning drainage systems after Cyclone Ava in January. Add a comma after "Toamasina".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Meteorological history
 * Link thunderstorm.
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * and MFR reported that Change "MFR" to "the MFR". Do this for each instance of this usage throughout the article. (I found 9 such cases in the MH section.)
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The incipient disturbance underwent a small clockwise loop over the rest of 2 March amid opposing steering flows from the north and south. Add a comma after "2 March".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * MFR noted the surrounding atmospheric environment See the above (second point for this section). Change "MFR" to "the MFR".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The JTWC stated that the system had become a tropical storm at 12:00 UTC on 2 March as it began producing 1-minute sustained winds of 65 km/h (40 mph). Add a comma after "2 March".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * MFR also upgraded the system to a tropical storm 00:00 UTC on 3 March based on scatterometer data, There are a few issues here. Change "MFR" to "The MFR". Also add "at" after "tropical storm", and add a comma after "3 March".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Modest strengthening ensued on 3 March as Dumazile began to move southwestwards in response to a developing ridge to its east. Change "southwestwards" to "southwestward". Also add a comma after "southwestward".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Quicker intensification I won't make this a requirement, but I would suggest changing "quicker" to "faster".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * began on 4 March as the inner core began to tighten up and the radius of maximum wind decreased, Add a comma after "4 March".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * with MFR upgrading Dumazile to a severe tropical storm by 06:00 UTC. Change "MFR" to "the MFR".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * leading MFR to assess that Same as the above.
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * An eye became increasingly apparent as Dumazile turned south-southeastwards while rounding the periphery of the ridge to its east, coinciding with significant strengthening through the morning of 5 March. Change "south-southeastwards" to "south-southeastward", and also add a comma after "south-southeastward".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * By 12:00 UTC, Dumazile reached its peak intensity as an intense tropical cyclone with 10-minute sustained winds of 165 km/h (105 mph), gusts up to 230 km/h (145 mph), and a minimum pressure of 945 hPa (27.91 inHg), as estimated by MFR; Add a comma after "intense tropical cyclone". Also change "MFR" to "the MFR".
 * Done. Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * the northwest part of the circulation Change "northwest" to "northwestern".
 * Done. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * as weakening began almost immediately with an increase in northwesterly wind shear over the system associated with an upper-level trough. Add a comma after "immediately".
 * Done. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * leading MFR to declare Dumazile became post-tropical by 00:00 UTC on 7 March. Change "MFR" to "the MFR". Also link "post-tropical" to post-tropical cyclone.
 * Done. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Link "subtropical storm" to subtropical cyclone.
 * Extratropical transition began later on 7 March while Dumazile accelerated southeastwards into the midlatitude westerlies. Add a comma after "7 March". Also change "southeastwards" to "southeastward".
 * Done. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * while MFR continued to monitor Dumazile Change "MFR" to "the MFR".
 * Done. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * The remnant system was last noted by MFR a day later. Same as the above.
 * Done. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 21:28, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Preparations, impact, and aftermath
 * with the exception of several in Saint-Paul and Saint-Leu where roadways were still blocked. Add a comma after "Saint-Leu".
 * The Volcanic highway, Capitalize "Volcanic Highway".
 * The Saint-Gilles port had to be unblocked after the storm due to debris and damage left behind. Add a comma after "the storm".
 * Change "cutoff" to "cut off".
 * Strong waves submerged four lanes of the coastal highway with seawater and 150 mm (5.9 in) of rain fell on a cliff overlooking the road. Add a comma after "seawater".
 * Numerous bridges were either swept away or submerged by floodwaters and several roads were flooded across Cilaos and Salazie. Add a comma after "floodwaters".
 * The RN5 highway was impassable for months at Îlet Furçy after several landslides occurred during cyclones Ava, Berguitta, and Dumazile. Add a comma after "Îlet Furçy}.
 * Link esplanade.
 * Access to the beach was prohibited from 19 March–6 April as a precautionary measure to prevent injuries. Add a comma after "6 April".
 * Repair work on the Cilaos bridge was halted due to severe conditions during the storm. Add a comma after "halted".
 * Residents erected a temporary bridge using ladders in order to rescue 400 marooned people elsewhere in Cilaos and another 100 on a beach near Îlet Furçy. Add a comma after "ladders".
 * Landslides occurred in two neighborhoods of Brittany and a wall collapsed in the mountain region. Add a comma after "Brittany". Also change "mountain" to "mountainous".
 * A large lake developed on the Plaine des Cafres due to heavy rainfall. Add a comma after "Plaine des Cafres".
 * A trail from Bois Court and Grand Bassin was closed due to damage sustained during cyclones Berguitta and Dumazile. Add a comma after "was closed".
 * Link Salazie.
 * The Dos d'Ane–Deux Bras hiking trail reopened on 17 July after suffering damage during cyclones Berguitta, Dumazile, and Fakir. Add a comma after "17 July".
 * Link severe weather.
 * and Sofia and the Farafangana, Nosy Varika, Manakara, Mananjary, and Vohipeno districts. Change "Sofia and the Farafangana" to "Sofia, as well as the Farafangana".
 * Portions of Toamasina flooded during the storm as a result of malfunctioning drainage systems that were damaged during Cyclone Ava. Add a comma after "during the storm".
 * Did the rest. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 21:40, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Copyvio check
 * I ran the article through Earwig's Copyvio Detection Tool. The tool did not find any matches (0.0%), and I didn't see anything that looked like a potential copyvio, either.


 * Source review
 * No issues here.

Final

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I am going to ✅ this article. Congratulations!  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 21:42, 3 July 2021 (UTC)