Talk:Cyclone Hary/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 20:21, 5 January 2013 (UTC)

Review

 * Lead
 * Seems fine


 * History
 * Good. Sadly, the prose here would benefit from the merge of some sentences, but due to the type of the article, this could only cause confusion.


 * Impact
 * Good. The prose here flows better :)


 * references
 * Ref #3 - "(French) ﻿Track for Intense Tropical Cyclone Hary﻿ (Report)." You should use  inside the  template.
 * No, the ref is in because it is a report. See Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Hurricane Gert (1993)/archive1. YE   Pacific   Hurricane  21:04, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll just change it. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 01:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Ref #4 - "Retrieved 2012-10-23." The date format is different frm the rest of the article
 * Fixed! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 01:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Final comments
 * As usual, I'd harly have to leave comments from your nominations. I only have those two comments from the references. Awaiting response. — ΛΧΣ  21  20:21, 5 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Hope you enjoyed it :) --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 01:01, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Yeah :) passed. — ΛΧΣ  21  01:35, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Yeah :) passed. — ΛΧΣ  21  01:35, 6 January 2013 (UTC)