Talk:Cyclone Hettie (2009)/GA1

GA Review
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Hi, I will be reviewing this article which is currently up for GAN. I should have the full review out shortly. Cyclonebiskit 15:49, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Remove "whilst" from the prose. Done
 * Cyclone Hettie, is currently the strongest depression to form this season. Shouldn't it be storm?
 * No - Depression is better as its an offical category unlike Storm Jason Rees (talk) 18:03, 7 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Link Tropical Cyclone Formation Alert in the lead Done
 * Add conversions to imperial units in parenthesis Done
 * Add (JTWC) next to the first use of Joint Typhoon Warning Center and replace the following uses with JTWC Done
 * Over the next couple of days the depression moved towards the northwest and weakened before RSMC Nadi released their final Tropical Disturbance Summary late on January 31, 2009... The 2009 isn't needed Done
 * However this did not occur and thus Hettie was just a minimal Category One Tropical Cyclone on the Australian Tropical Cyclone Intensity Scale, at its peak, with winds of 65 km/h (40 mph). "Just a minimal Category One..." is Point of View, try and reword this Done
 * Add commas after "However" whenever you use it Done
 * In the preparations and impact section, link the warnings to Tropical cyclone warnings and watches Not done - Ive linked to Gale Warnings instead.
 * There have been no reports about any damage on Rotuma, however there was 33.8 mm and 22.0 mm of rain dumped on Rotuma up until 9am FST on January 24 and January 25, respectively. Reword please, it's a bit strange. Done
 * The table of strongest storms is missing the ninth strongest - Done

Overall a fairly good start, there are several issues that need to be addressed so I'm putting this article on hold for now. Cyclonebiskit 16:00, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good now, I'm passing the article. Nice job! Cyclonebiskit 23:20, 7 February 2009 (UTC)