Talk:Cyclone Indlala

Todo
Perhaps it should be mid importance. The first thing to do would be fix the spelling errors. ♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 18:41, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Done. Juliancolton (talk) 18:50, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * No it's not. There are still several typos, and the overall writing could be better. ♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 20:21, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Pretty sure I got them all now. I also copyedited the article a little, which should improve the writing. Juliancolton (talk) 20:42, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Fix the Infobox, please. I still see a few typos, but it's a little better. More wikilinks would be nice. Did the cyclone affect any other areas? What about Seychelles, perhaps? How many people were killed, as the infobox and impact section don't match up. More units would be nice, such as where it formed, where it moved ashore, etc. I have a problem with citing Meteo France in the article when you say that Indlala was the equivalent of a Cat. 4 hurricane, as nowhere in the source says it was at that strength. --♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 20:51, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Done, except, I can't find anything in the sources I used, or anywhere for that matter, that says anywhere besides Madagascar was affected. I will continue looking, though. Aside from that,is the writing any good, now? Juliancolton (talk) 21:02, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * I more meant it'd be nice if you said where the system formed, in km and miles. The writing is not particularly good, but it's better. It could use a copyedit from a fresh set of eyes. Overall, nice job with the article. ♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 22:50, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I will fix that, and should I reuqest a copyedit from the Leaque of Copyeditors, or should I just keep on stabbing at it myself? Juliancolton (talk) 22:52, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * The LoC is pretty busy, but maybe it's worth a shot. ♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 22:57, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Ok. Oh, and is there enough impact? I was concerned that there was not enough impact for 88 deaths, but that was all I could find. Juliancolton (talk) 22:58, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * It'd be nice if there were more than 4 impact sources. ♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 23:07, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * I will continue looking. Although, the only impact that I have found so far is from relief web. Juliancolton (talk) 23:08, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * If you're still searching, perhaps you should withdraw your request. ♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 23:10, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * I doubt I will find anything more, but, I think I will keep my request, even if I have to stop editing this article. Juliancolton (talk) 23:13, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Given how recent it is, and how deadly it was, I'm sure there's more info. --♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 23:14, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Yea, I found some more, but I don't know if it will affect the LoCE request. Juliancolton (talk) 23:15, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Well, if you're going to add some more info, and the article wasn't too hot after you first published, perhaps you should withdraw it, as I don't think it's unreasonable that if you add more, there'll be more typos. --♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 23:17, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * What if I use the spell checker on my computer? Than could I add more, and still keep the request? Juliancolton (talk) 23:18, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * There are more problems than just the spelling. ♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 23:19, 23 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Oh, ok. I will withdraw my request later. I doubt you have the time, but would you mind just giving it a general copyedit? That would really help. Juliancolton (talk) 23:21, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh, and is there anything in this article that could be used in the DYK? Juliancolton (talk) 01:16, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

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