Talk:Cyclone Rusty/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 03:46, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

All in all a good read! ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 03:46, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
 * "Originating as an area of low pressure on 22 February well to the northeast of the Kimberley region" - northeast or northwest? The track map looks northwest of Western Australia
 * "steadily developed within a favourable environment. Steadily decreasing" - more word variety?
 * " a monsoon trough combined with the Madden-Julian Oscillation" - did they really combine though? Doesn't the MJO more enhance a trough than combine to produce a storm? I might be wrong though.
 * Great bit about the record high water temperatures fueling the storm. Nothing to do here, just good job.
 * You should specify what a "severe tropical cyclone" is. I had to look through TC scales a bit to realize it meant a C3 on the Australian scale.
 * "Shortly thereafter, land interaction incited weakening as Rusty began drifting south-southeast as the ridge over Australia began to rebuild." - could be cleaner
 * "A local race was cancelled due to the storm in Esperance." - this seems borderline trivial
 * "1.4 million megalitres" - I'm not sure what a megalitre is. Given you're already using million here, why not just use billion or whatever and just use ordinary litres?
 * " Melbourne was expected to have a record stretch of 30 °C (86 °F) or higher temperatures as the air mass moved east" - did it?