Talk:Cynfarwy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Grandiose (talk · contribs) 17:55, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

I'll be completing the review shortly. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 17:55, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Image checks out fine.
 * I've checked some of the citations. I'm worried that the sentence "His name is recorded in the Bonedd y Saint, a Welsh genealogical tract compiled in the late 18th century using material from older manuscripts. He is described there as the son of "Awy ab Llehenog, Lord of Cornwall", but nothing is known about Awy ab Llehenog." is too similar in the presentation of ideas to reference #3, per WP:CP. This should be addressed.
 * Realistically, the only other issue is that of length and/or scope - currently raised at the GAN talk page. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 21:53, 5 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Reworded to keep on your sweet side rather than as an admission that it was unacceptable, but out of interest did you mean Copyright problems, or did you mean the essay Close paraphrasing? BencherliteTalk 22:17, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, yes, the latter. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 22:32, 5 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, as the only person to join in the discussion at WT:GAN takes a view which which I agree, and you've said you don't really have an opinion, is there anything else left? BencherliteTalk 17:26, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * I was going to give it 24 hours longer, but there are no other issues - so as it stands it'll pass. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 17:29, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Passing - no further comments. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 09:51, 7 December 2011 (UTC)