Talk:Cypriot nationality law/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 09:36, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

I will review this, it might take a few days.  The C of E God Save the King!  ( talk ) 09:36, 2 January 2023 (UTC)


 * The Central Powers source should be at the end per WP:CITEFOOT.
 * Fixed.


 * An WP:INLINE citation is needed for the divide and rule sentence, otherwise it needs rewording as it seems a little WP:POV
 * Added additional reference to Xypolia.


 * Is there a name for the 1930 law that let Cypriots opt for turkish nationality but not left the island?
 * No, the original order published in the Cyprus Gazette doesn't have a name.


 * A source needed for the British nationality 1948 sentence
 * Was sourced to references at end of paragraph but rearranged to more clearly cite.


 * Source needed for the 1967 intercommunal violence.
 * Also rearranged.


 * Source for the establishment of the turkish republic
 * Added appropriate page to the citation for that paragraph.


 * More to come  The C of E God Save the King!  ( talk ) 10:48, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
 * "Cypriot citizens remain Commonwealth citizens in British law", another CITEFOOT issue
 * Fixed.


 * Same for "Cypriot citizens have since been able to live and work in other EU/EFTA countries"
 * Fixed.


 * Citizenship by investment's opening paragraph could do with additional citations for the criteria in the body
 * Broke citation at end of paragraph into individual references in body.


 * Was there a court case or any sanctions for the programme violating the Treaty?
 * No, the European Commission didn't get that far before the government was embarrassed into ending the programme itself.


 * Source needed for opening sentence of Citizenship by descent
 * Added appropriate page to the citation for that paragraph.


 * Same for Naturalisation
 * Attributed to citation at end of paragraph.


 * Same for Relinquishment
 * Attributed to citation at end of paragraph.


 * The reference for the Treaty establishing Cyprus needs more information, like the NYT source as per WP:CITEWEB
 * Switched to Template:cite web.


 * In all, it is looking good but just needs those majority citation issues sorted. Ping me when its done and I will have another look.  The C of E God Save the King!  ( talk ) 07:18, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking a look at this article. I've gone through and addressed everything. Let me know if there's anything more you want me to adjust. Cheers, Horserice (talk) 09:05, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me then, congratulations on your GA.  The C of E God Save the King!  ( talk ) 07:14, 9 January 2023 (UTC)