Talk:Cyprus in the Eurovision Song Contest 2005/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:13, 2 March 2024 (UTC)


 * "Its best placing was fifth" to "Its best performance was a fifth-place finish"?
 * I tried it for a second, but calling it a performance in this type of article made it seem like I was talking about the "best performance" of a specific song, not performance in terms of success. Grk1011 (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * "and the prior year" to "and the previous year" maybe
 * "broadcaster has used internal selections" to "broadcaster had used internal selections"
 * "For this year" to "In 2004"
 * "Christoforou previously represented" had
 * With word of Christoforou's selection Alongside
 * "broadcast on RIK 1, RIK Sat as well as online via cybc.cy" to "broadcast on RIK 1 and RIK Sat, as well as online via cybc.cy"
 * "contained English translation" to "contained an English translation of the show"
 * "Sokratis Soumelas (EMI Greece)" EMI Greece is his company, not a profession like you've included for the others
 * Somewhat clarified this. Sort of bound by the source. I don't know what he did at EMI. Grk1011 (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * "points from 1–8, 10 and 12 to the" to "1–8, 10, or 12 points to the"
 * "both evenings of the contest" to "both rounds of the contest"
 * Refs seem generally reliable; will spot-check later.
 * Images are fine. AryKun (talk) 16:12, 3 March 2024 (UTC)

I've taken a look at your initial comments and made some changes! Grk1011 (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Okay, did some spot-checks, will pass now. AryKun (talk) 06:33, 12 March 2024 (UTC)