Talk:Cyprus in the Eurovision Song Contest 2020/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:54, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments I'm concerned over the final point, the others can be addressed relatively easily, so it's on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 13:23, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Not sure what "was internally selected by the" means. Do you mean without a public vote?
 * "It's best" -> "Its best"
 * "has managed to qualify for the final in all of the contests it has participated in" ->"has qualified for the final of all the contests in which it has participated."
 * ", Cyprus Broadcasting Corporation (CyBC) " overlinked but you've already abbreviated it so just use that.
 * "German singer Sandro" previously referred to as "Greek-American-German singer Sandro " and not sure you need to call him German when you go on to say he was born in Germany...
 * "2012 entrant Ivi Adamou " sea of blue.
 * "Season 5" no need for capital s.
 * "considered.[11][12][9]" reorder refs.
 * " Rotterdam, Netherlands and " comma after netherlands.
 * "May, and a final " -> "May followed by a final"
 * "charged with staging" -> "responsible for"
 * "tenth in a field of 14" "10th in a field of 14" or "tenth in a field of fourteen".
 * Ref 10 has two spaced hyphens, they should be en-dashes.
 * Overall, and I know this is a problem with a number of such "cancellation" articles, there's not a huge amount of this article dedicated to this year's (aborted) event. I have my own example, The Boat Race 2020 which does cover historical issues, but has much more dedicated to the specific year event.
 * I've made all of the changes you've requested. I opted to remove "internal" from the lead as it's explained in further detail later in the article. Regarding your last point, there are a number of other alternative events (that are not mentioned) in planning that I could easily add as more information becomes available. At some point I will also be able to add a sentence or two about whether Sandro will be the Cypriot entry the next year. I don't think these omissions arise to the level of calling the article "incomplete", but there are opportunities for more to be written at a later time if need be. Grk1011 (talk) 14:22, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Sure, I think it's adequate for GA and I'm happy with the changes you've made, so I'm promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 07:44, 30 April 2020 (UTC)