Talk:Cyril Bourlon de Rouvre

Cleanup of article
I've taken the liberty to make a few changes to this article:
 * I redid the citations, fixing any dead links and using the cite web template, and
 * I cleaned up some of the blatant mistakes in grammar.

There are still a few issues with this, but I am not sure how best to proceed:
 * The second paragraph of section 1.3 is worded weirdly. It should be rewritten, but I am not sure how best to rewrite it to make it better.
 * The statement regarding rallying with Thierry Sabine needs a citation - a quick cursory search on Google didn't turn much up regarding this.
 * In Section 1.1 "Director of export" should either be "Director of Export" or "director of export" (probably the former, as it's a title).

Any suggestions or edits would be appreciated. Dylan1496 (talk) 06:31, 3 June 2021 (UTC)