Talk:D'oh-in' in the Wind/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa   (talk)  10:04, 22 May 2011 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing the article shortly. I'll give it a read through now and add any queries below. Miyagawa  (talk)  10:04, 22 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Production: "At this point, Kirkland had gotten over the divorce and felt better, returning to direct the episode." - for some reason it just doesn't seem to flow right. Could I suggest "Kirkland returned to direct the episode, feeling better after getting over the divorce."
 * "Both Jill St. John and Phyllis Diller were voiced by American voice actress Tress MacNeille." - probably better to switch it around to become "Jill St. John and Phyllis Diller were both voiced by American..."
 * Fixed both. Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:45, 22 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Reception: Is there any figures available for the viewing numbers on the original television broadcast?
 * I couldn't find any free sources, but I'll ask a user if they can find one. Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:45, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Got a hold on the ratings info, thanks to  R uby2010   comment! . Queenieacoustic (talk) 11:08, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Probably a long shot, but if you have access to that book source, can a direct reference to the book replace the BBC News citation?
 * I don't have it, unfortunately. Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:45, 22 May 2011 (UTC)

Made a quick grammar fix towards the end, but other than that I think the article is good to go. You've used the DVD episode commentary which is always a good source for production information, and the reception section is well balanced. Miyagawa  (talk)  10:16, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! I'll try to get a hold on some ratings info, so until then! Queenieacoustic (talk) 12:45, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem, I'll pop the article on hold for now, let me know if you get ahold of them. Miyagawa   (talk)  23:03, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Pretty sure the article is ready to pass now. If there are any other concerns, let me know. :) Queenieacoustic (talk) 11:08, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Brilliant, that all checks out. Thanks for adding the ratings information, I'm happy to pass as a GA. Miyagawa   (talk)  16:14, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
 * Nice, thanks! :D Queenieacoustic (talk) 08:31, 26 May 2011 (UTC)