Talk:Dézafi

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 January 2020 and 29 April 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Celtqueen, Rmb7i. Peer reviewers: Omt2e, Coopert411.

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Amendments
Lead: Add a comma after 1975 It might be better to say that is is a novel written by Frankétienne and then say it was the first to be written in Haitian Creole in a subsequent sentence. // Add Sintil into this sentence as it’s weird to read it as him. “...populace into overthrowing (Sintil), which…” // The first book ever written in Haitian Creole? Or published? The reference that it links to (I skimmed) seems unrelated to the book entirely. // I’d love to see more links to things if possible.

Content: Link to Port-au-Prince’s page // Siltana and Sintil have sexual relationship? If so, make pronouns more clear. // Cock fight(s) // Link to Haitian language page // Narrative’s reality // Original 1975 version/publication // Italicize Dézafi // Link to Culture of Haiti page // In the later 2002 edition of the book many more font sizes and (typefaces) were added beyond the (original) three, in addition to other changes relating to spelling and formatting. // Link to Duvalier regime // Link to Creole an French // General public of Haiti was* // Regime // Link to the Haitian literature page // Link to UNESCO // Link to Ordre des Arts et des Lettres // Link to Nobel Prize in Literature

Tone and Balance: Tone is mostly neutral, don't see heavy biased (assuming claims are backed up by sources) // Feels a bit anti-Duvalier in tone

Sources and References: Each paragraph that needs references has them // There are 8 sources // 1st link seems to be unrelated to the novel

Organization: Well written. // There are some spelling and grammatical errors that I pointed out above in Content // 4 sections + lead // The structure section is a little oddly structured. I would have wanted a description of the different type faces before seeing the example.

Images and Media: Missing an image

Info box: Needs lots of links to be added (author, country, language, genres, publisher's page etc)

Omt2e (talk) 18:19, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Really good advice from your peer review - do incorporated those suggestions. In the Structure section, you need more citations. You might consider revealing earlier what the title means. Try to get an image in. Really nice infobox and reputable sources. &#42;Yseut229* (talk) 22:58, 11 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Categories. There aren’t any. Savvyjack23 (talk) 00:50, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

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