Talk:DJ Iroc

Capital letters
It is important for credibility and readability that articles be capitalized correctly. Please refer to Wikipedia:Manual of Style (capital letters). RevZoe (talk) 19:44, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

Lists in sentences
While showing some examples of work is good, loading sentences with long lists of examples results in run-on sentences. This makes the article very difficult to read, and creates a tone which may not support the goals of an encyclopedia. In general, limit lists in sentences to three items or less. RevZoe (talk) 19:44, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

Subject
In general, this is an article about a person named Anthony Angelo, who performs under the name DJ Iroc. References which are not directly about his professional career should therefore be made to Anthony Angelo or some variation. RevZoe (talk) 19:47, 30 March 2009 (UTC) woman..say whaaaaaaaaaaat????? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 41.241.104.34 (talk) 14:15, 16 August 2011 (UTC)

Redundant phrasing
Several examples of redundant phrasing should be avoided. A person who hosts a radio show is known as a DJ, so hosting a radio show implies DJing a radio show also. In addition, DJing is a form of performance, so if you perform with someone, and you are a DJ, this implies that you DJ with them. RevZoe (talk) 19:58, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

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