Talk:DNA (BTS song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lirim.Z (talk · contribs) 00:28, 10 August 2020 (UTC)

I am reviewing this version from August 7, 2020; 1:32 am

Lead and infobox
✅ everything
 * Just use Big Hit, 'Entertainment' doesn't need to be used
 * Please add an alt description in the Infobox
 * You could add the language parameter
 * Should be mentioned that the cover is for the digital release and regular edition
 * The studio is mentioned in "Background and release", but not in the Infobox
 * Delete unused parameters
 * You don't need to use flatlist in the Infoboxes; it's included in the template; see Template:Infobox song

Background and release

 * "The song was written by "Hitman" Bang, Supreme Boi, Kass, Suga, RM and its producer Pdogg. It was engineered by Pdogg, Jeong Wooyeong and KASS, while mixing was handled by James F. Reynolds at Schmuzik Studios. BTS recorded the song at Big Hit Studios in Seoul, South Korea." Is there a reason this isn't under "Music and lyrics"?
 * I generally prefer to keep it in Background section.


 * again just Big Hit

Music and lyrics

 * You could add a picture of RM or Suga
 * There are already two images in the next section, plus this section contains an audio sample. So I don't think an image is needed here? Besides having an image of either here would be WP:UNDUE to just one of them.

Critical reception and awards
✅ everything
 * "Reviewing for Vulture, Dee Lockett stated that song evolved", you missed a "the"
 * The ref column should not be sortable

Commercial performance
✅ everything
 * "of the September 2017 issue of the Gaon Monthly Digital Chart based on digital sales" Link to Gaon Digital Chart, not Gaon Music Chart
 * "the 56th and 22nd best-selling song of 2017 and 2018, respectively in South Korea." The Digital Chart combines Downloads+Streams so saying best-selling is wrong; it should "the 56th and 22nd best-performing" or something similar
 * might be worth mentioning that DNA sold nearly 100,000 downloads in the US

Music video
✅ Rephrased the sentence accordingly
 * "third video by a K-pop artist" It is the fourth to do so after "Gangnam Style", "Gentleman" and "Ddu-Du Ddu-Du", unless you meant that they are the third Korean act to do so; The Ref (97) you used does not mention "Gentleman"

Live performances and other usage
No issues

Track listings
✅
 * "Digital download / streaming - Korean version" Replace the hyphen (-) with an en-dash (–)

Credits and personnel
✅
 * The credits are the same for both version so just add "Korean/Japanese version"

Charts
✅
 * No need for a space after the "1" and the Note
 * #133 on Gaon Digital Chart Year-End for 2019

Sales and certifications

 * No issues

Release history
✅
 * rowspan="4" for December 6, no need to seperate this

Copy Vialotion

 * Copy Violation: I used this tool; The highest in the article is 32,9%, because you copied lyrics translations; generally only copied lyrics or used direct quotes – I see no issue

Outcome

 * There are some small things to work on here, but all in all a very good article. Five days should be enough to fix the minor issues. I'll grant you 5 days to edit the article, you seem active enough. Best regards  Lirim  |  Talk  00:28, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Lirim.Z, thank you so much for reviewing this article. I've mostly fixed all issues that you pointed out, except a few and have left comments accordingly. Please let me know if anything else needs to be fixed or if I've missed out anything. -- Ashley yoursmile!  09:20, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 74, 127, 128, 131 still need chart issue dates-- Lirim  |  Talk  18:08, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Lirim, ✅ -- Ashley yoursmile!  18:30, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * I am passing this article. Very good written, structured article. Looking forward to more.-- Lirim  |  Talk  19:37, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Edit:: I forgot, that I should wait for a couple of days if somebody else has some comments. I am sorry.-- Lirim  |  Talk  19:46, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Lirim.Z, thanks a lot for this review! I'm happy to hear that you're ready to pass this. A small query: Does this stand a chance as a FA in future? I'd really appreciate your feedback. Of course I shall make the necessary changes to the prose, etc., but I would like to ask for your opinion first. -- Ashley yoursmile!  20:10, 10 August 2020 (UTC)
 * It has been nearly three days. That should be enough. Article passed this review.-- Lirim  |  Talk  12:10, 13 August 2020 (UTC)