Talk:DOBAG Carpet Initiative/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:39, 11 July 2021 (UTC)

Copy changes
The copy is actually okay. Some suggestions for general improvement:


 * Remove comma after "antique woven carpets"
 * Remove comma after "cheap and easy to use"
 * "having a hard, metallic look," and being, "dull and dead" remove the second and third commas
 * Remove comma after "in 1953"
 * Remove comma after "from plants"
 * Capitalize "Traditional" in Marmara University Department of traditional Handicraft and Design

Images
All of the images are appropriately licensed. There might be one or two too many for the page layout. The Islamic Gallery photo may be best used as a photo opposite the lede, to show an example of the project's own work.

Other notes

 * There are no copyvio concerns.
 * The article is stable, almost too much so; the nominator made various grammar changes and then published the page.

This article generally feels underdeveloped for a GA, and I am worried that the nominator had little to do with any of its writing. wrote more than 90 percent of the total prose on this page and seems to be a topic expert. The recommendations on the page will at least fix some of its larger structural issues, though I am doubtful a GA can be had. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:55, 11 July 2021 (UTC)