Talk:Da Boom/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tb hotch Ta lk C.  01:57, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * General
 * 1 dab link
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * File:FGDaBoom.png need to be reduced.
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Not done. It should be at least 200px and at most 300px Tb hotch Ta lk C.  23:44, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry, this is the second time I've done that. For some reason I always forget to reduce the image size. Anyway, done now. Gage (talk) 23:47, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Image needs Alternative text caption, as well as a better caption as other Family Guy Good Articles
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Plot
 * "of the world and mutating" ... "from mutations" -> overlinked
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * "As the family then grows hungry," -> maybe is me, but this sound awkward
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * "As the family walks away" -> family is not a plural word?
 * There's only one family. Why would it be plural? Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Production
 * second season of Family Guy and the first -> second season of Family Guy, and the first
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * who had wrote episodes for the show in the first season including "Mind Over Murder". -> Source soes not state it
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * In Ref 2, RealNetworks, Inc. publish Film.com
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Ref 3, 4, 5, 8 need publisher
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * This has become a running gag, having reappeared in episodes such as "Blind Ambition", "No Chris Left Behind" and in "Meet the Quagmires".[7] He is voiced by regular show writer Danny Smith.[7] -> Source does not state them. Tb hotch Ta lk C.  01:57, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:37, 28 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Reception
 * Isn't there ratings about the episodie?
 * Every effort has been made to locate ratings for episodes prior to 2001. Unfortunately, there is no such information available, especally not from a reliable source. So, there are no ratings information available to my knowledge, as I have attempted to locate them for many epiodes for this season. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)


 * External links
 * The "external wiki" fails WP:ELNO
 * Done. Gage (talk) 23:32, 28 July 2010 (UTC)

On hold one week (August 3, 2010 UTC). Tb hotch Ta lk C. 01:59, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I reviewed again and I see nothing wrong so, congratulations the article pass its GAN. Tb hotch Ta lk C.  00:00, 29 July 2010 (UTC)