Talk:Daglish railway station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Trains2050 (talk · contribs) 14:49, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Greetings. Its my first review so please be patient, thanks
 * Hiya, good article in general, after speaking with, they made a few comments. the last comment is mine. I am going to put the review on hold until you make any changes.
 * Are you sure the images are well laid out? There are three images on the left-hand side of the article, all placed next to each other.
 * I remove one of those images. Now there is a bit more space between them.
 * There are some repetitive words, for example: "On the platform are two small red brick buildings under a single terracotta tiled roof. Between the buildings is an undercover area for seating. The building displays elements of the Federation Bungalow architectural style." and "The station was constructed during 1923 and the first part of 1924. During construction, the station was often called the Lawler Street station"
 * I have reworded these.
 * Relating to the last sentence, who often called the station Lawler Street station, how often did they call it that, and why?
 * I added the reason why. The source only says "The new 'Lawler Street Station'as it was frequently referred to prior to completion...", so the people who can't be said, and the how often can't be made more specific.
 * The service information is out of date. How has COVID affected the passenger figures?
 * Unfortunately, there is no more recent passenger figures than the ones in the article. Transperth/the PTA do not routinely publish passenger figures for specific stations.
 * "Christmas Day has a different timetable to other public holidays. At night time, trains are half-hourly or hourly" This is confusing. Does it mean trains are half-hourly or hourly at night time on Christmas Day, or night time in general?
 * I have swapped these two sentences, so now it should be clearer.
 * Have there been any accidents or incidents at the station?
 * No accidents, or at least none that are important enough to write in here. I did a search on https://trove.nla.gov.au/, and all I could find are nearby motor vehicle accidents.
 * It mentions that the tactile paving is not adequate, does this mean that there is still some tactile paving or none at all?
 * Thanks, I have clarified this in the article.
 * Thanks Trains2050 (talk)
 * I have addressed all your points. I look forward to hearing from you. Steelkamp (talk) 14:37, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks, it is a shame that Transperth does not publish passenger figures, thank you for making these changes, I will pass this. Trains2050 (talk)