Talk:Dan Borislow/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 21:42, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: Three found and fixed. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:48, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Linkrot: One found and tagged. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:52, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Before I commence the main review the merge discussion needs to be resolved. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:52, 14 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Merge discussion ended. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 23:19, 14 January 2011 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * meaning that YMAX went on Nasdaq following to merger. Bad grammar, what is this supposed to mean?
 * Reworded. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 01:38, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
 * so he requested Scanlan to be the conditioner for his horses. "conditioner"? Is this a US horse racing term?
 * Yes. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 01:38, 20 January 2011 (UTC)
 * The lead makes no mention of his philanthropy. WP:LEAD states that the lead should be a summary of the whole article.
 * Added. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 06:00, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * One dead link found.
 * Removed link from ref. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 06:16, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Other references check out OK
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * He was arrested in 1992 for illegally possessing a firearm in New Jersey. In an interview with Alex Berenson of TheStreet.com, when Berenson questioned whether this affected Borislow's ability to run a company, he replied, "Possession of a registered firearm in the wrong state -- big whoopee. Is this necessary?
 * Removed. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 06:36, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
 * The company's fortunes turned, and following an annual loss of $221 million in 1998 Needs explanation of what caused the turn in fortune
 * Clarified. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs ) ~ 06:51, 22 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * OK, on hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed
 * OK, thanks for the fixes, I think this sufficently meets the criteria to be listed. Passing as GA> Jezhotwells (talk) 02:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * OK, on hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed
 * OK, thanks for the fixes, I think this sufficently meets the criteria to be listed. Passing as GA> Jezhotwells (talk) 02:26, 23 January 2011 (UTC)