Talk:Dan Branch

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I am the creator of the content on www.danbranch.com, and drafted the text for the house.state.tx.us web site as well. I also have the rights to the photos posted. Please feel free to contact me at trimble15@gmail.com. I will also e-mail permissions-en@wikimedia.org.Trimble15 (talk) 18:55, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

R. Trimble

OTRS ticket number "2009050410066389" —Preceding unsigned comment added by Trimble15 (talk • contribs) 15:40, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Article in desperate need of NPOV rewriting
The article suffers from considerable promotional material, some of it apparently introduced by campaign workers and much of it taken from Branch's own website. In some cases, all that is needed is for the relevant article to be cited from its original source; for example, a quote from the Dallas Morning News links back to the Branch campaign's press clippings, but could as easily be replaced with a link to the same article from the paper's own site or similar impartial source. In other cases, the advertising-type language (pretty sure "heart of Dallas" is not an official designation of that area) needs excision. Will do what I can, in the interest of Wikipedia's "be bold" guideline, but wanted to highlight the need for editing. Lawikitejana (talk) 16:55, 7 February 2014 (UTC)
 * The main issue is the poor citations, or even lack of citations. This needs more work to get to a C level article. Bearian (talk) 18:24, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

New Edits

 * Removed "Rice University, which is private, is also a top-tier school.";WP:IRI
 * Removed "On July 8, 2013, Governor Rick Perry announced that he would not seek a fourth full term. ";WP:IRI
 * Removed "Beyond his professional service"; WP:IRI
 * Removed "On a regular basis, Branch visited elementary, middle, and high schools in his legislative district."; WP:IRI 106.79.205.18 (talk) 10:04, 19 January 2015 (UTC)

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