Talk:Dan French

Neutrality
This article does need some improvement. The content relating to French's county exec race may not be relevant, and there is a subtle bias in the career section. I recommend updating the former section and editing the latter. The article has potential, but isn't there yet. Sethbwa (talk) 23:41, 23 August 2011 (UTC)Sethbwa

That's fair. I deleted inking that may have contributed to bias and removed outdated information from the section on his county executive candidacy. It's looking better. Journojunkie (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2011 (UTC)Journojunkie

It's looking pretty good, honestly. Not perfect, but good. Can someone just update the County Exec section? After that, we can remove the neutrality message. 143.229.210.120 (talk) 00:00, 2 September 2011 (UTC)CSW
 * The article isn't protected, you can update it yourself. GB fan please review my editing 00:09, 2 September 2011 (UTC)

Thank you GB! So I updated it, and think it's looking good. I offer a motion to increase the article to class B and remove the neutrality message. 143.229.210.119 (talk) 01:32, 4 September 2011 (UTC)CSW

Sorry I've been away for a while. It looks good. I updated the county exec section to include the opponent's name -- that's important to ensuring neutrality. Beyond that, however, I second CSW's motion. Sethbwa (talk) 17:56, 4 September 2011 (UTC)Sethbwa

External links modified
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 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20110830225257/http://themillbrookindependent.com/content/dan-french-runs-against-molinaro-executive to http://themillbrookindependent.com/content/dan-french-runs-against-molinaro-executive
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20110609215601/http://www.poughkeepsiejournal.com:80/article/20110607/NEWS01/106070336/Dan-French-accepts-Democratic-nomination-Dutchess-County-exec to http://www.poughkeepsiejournal.com/article/20110607/NEWS01/106070336/Dan-French-accepts-Democratic-nomination-Dutchess-County-exec

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