Talk:Danelectro PRO

Article title
Article title is too specific and technical. It should include "electric guitar" so that the general user knows what information is being offered.--Wloveral (talk) 18:54, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I disagree. Nothing of consequence would be gained by adding "electric guitar" to the title. It would be a bit redundant, as the opening line would then be "The Danelectro PRO electric guitar is an electric guitar made by Danelectro." Also, I'm unclear how the article reads like an advertisement. It's written in a neutral tone with a description of the subject and references included. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.51.192.194 (talk) 21:21, 1 June 2008 (UTC)