Talk:Dangerously in Love 2/GA1

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Reviewer: Blackjacks101 (talk) 13:47, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this shortly =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 13:47, 13 March 2011 (UTC)


 * The song later became the title track to Knowles' debut album of the same name, Dangerously in Love < cut out “of the same name, Dangerously In Love” ✅ Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * spawned generally < spawned a generally ✅ Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * of positive reception < of positive reviews ✅ Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * retitled < titled ✅ Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * No official music video exists for the song, though the performance on her Live at Wembley DVD was frequently aired on BET. < proof?
 * I removed it. Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)


 * According to the sheet music published at Music Notes by Hal Leonard Corporation, < unnecessary
 * If you see recent GAs, this is how the composition section is written. It should have a sentence stating from where the music sheet was taken and who published it. Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)


 * After doing the above suggestion comebine the next two sentence like "Dangerously in Love" is a moderate R&B-quiet storm ballad pacing in medium time while also containing samples of soul music.
 * Related to above. Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)


 * According to < cut out ✅ Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * was generally positively received < received mostly positive reviews ✅ Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine gave a mixed review of the song, stating that although superfluous, it seemed a bit dated: "Unfortunately, the album is bottom-heavy with mid-tempo numbers and R&B balladry; a near-carbon copy of Survivor's melodramatic "Dangerously in Love" is completely superfluous [...]". < Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine gave a mixed review of the song, stating that it seemed a bit dated and that it was “a near-carbon copy of Survivor’s melodramatic “Dangerously in Love” [that] is completly superfluous.” ✅ Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * half-a-million of ringtones. < five hundred thousand ringtones. ✅ Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Your live performance sections is really unclear since you keep switching from place to place. Go back and organize in accordingly to make it more sense.
 * I will do this after 18 hours. I have to go to school. Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅ Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  11:58, 14 March 2011 (UTC)

Finish this and I will come back.--Blackjacks101 (talk) 14:47, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you. Jivesh    &bull;  Talk2Me  18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Much better now =D....passing--Blackjacks101 (talk) 13:05, 14 March 2011 (UTC)