Talk:Daniel Loss

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 04:32, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
 * Basic biographical information required, including date and place of birth, education, other positions held (with dates)
 * Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * After expansion, article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
 * Information on research should be expanded and put into appropriate context. An explanation of the importance of his research, understandable by a non-specialist, would be useful
 * References should be expanded
 * I've added an external link which could be used to expand article