Talk:Daniel O'Connell (journalist)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: maclean (talk) 04:11, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
 * GA review (see What is a good article?)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * 2) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * One image: Commons hosted public domain image of Daniel O'Connell
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * One image: Commons hosted public domain image of Daniel O'Connell
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Notes
 * The 3rd citation has O'Connell listed as author but the content being cited is from the "BIOGRAPHICAL SKETCH BY WM. GREER HARRISON"
 * The intro sentence is very good.
 * The intro section should be expanded to include a more substantial summary of his life.
 * Per MOS:INTRO, information in the lead section should not appear in the lead if it is not covered in the remainder of the article. The grand-nephew sentence only appears in the lead and is not part of the main article. Please include this into one of the main sections.


 * Well, I was overcome by the availability of a couple of references that I had not previously noticed, so I expanded the article with a bunch of new bits. I reorganized it into more headings and expanded the intro to two paragraphs. I inserted the grand-nephew/grand-uncle relation early in the article text. The third citation has been changed to show Harrison as author of the biographical sketch within the larger book of O'Connell's poetry. I believe that I have addressed your points. Binksternet (talk) 20:35, 10 January 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, looks good. --maclean (talk) 22:36, 10 January 2010 (UTC)