Talk:Daniel Radcliffe/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Monkeymanman (talk) 21:42, 1 April 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Reviewer: Artoasis (talk) 13:58, 2 April 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose):  b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * I sampled the career section and spotted the following grammar errors.
 * — "Radcliffe opened on 27 February 2007 in a revival of Peter Shaffer's play Equus..." ✅
 * — "It was announced in the New York Times on 28 December 2007 that Radcliffe will..." ✅
 * — "Radcliffe appeared in the television series Extras as a parody of himself, as well as filming the independent Australian drama December Boys..." ✅
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * — Self-published/unreliable sources: Contact Music, monster and critics, Celebrity Net Worth, DanRadcliffe.com, InterfaithFamily.com, Isbi Schools, Radar Online, Musical Cyberspace
 * — "Award" section lacks reference
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * The "Career" section is reasonably focused, but the "Personal life" section is a bit too heavy, with trivial information such as the amount of money his T-shirt raised (£520) or where he spent his 18th birthday and how he "queued up for the autographs" of some players.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Since it is currently locked, no edit wars are observed.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I think the article still needs a fair amount of work to pass for GA.
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I think the article still needs a fair amount of work to pass for GA.