Talk:Daniel Radcliffe/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: Artoasis (talk) 14:48, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Thanks! I think the lead looks better now then it did before.
 * More ce is coming...
 * OK, all done. Artoasis (talk) 15:09, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
 * More ce is coming...
 * OK, all done. Artoasis (talk) 15:09, 5 June 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * I am not sure what you meant.... Crystal Clear x3 22:11, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I was referring to this BBC link, pointing to a very short and immature bio. I think it would be better to use it as an inline ref, or simply remove it. Artoasis (talk) 14:22, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Ohh. I agree that the reference should be removed, but when I looked through the Early Life section I couldn't find it. What # is it? Crystal Clear x3 21:52, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the confusion. For EL, I meant the External link section, :)
 * Oh, lol. done Crystal Clear x3 00:21, 4 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, lol. done Crystal Clear x3 00:21, 4 June 2011 (UTC)


 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * Much more focused this time.
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks!!! =) Crystal Clear x3 23:12, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks!!! =) Crystal Clear x3 23:12, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks!!! =) Crystal Clear x3 23:12, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks!!! =) Crystal Clear x3 23:12, 5 June 2011 (UTC)