Talk:Daniel Sprong/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:06, 12 August 2016 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:06, 12 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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 * no dab links

Lead

 * "and made the Penguins immediately after being drafted." - I think you mean he made the Penguins squad

Junior

 * "at ages four and five Sprong played on teams with players as old as twelve or thirteen." - a comma is missing inbetween the words five and

Sprong
 * "The following season Sprong" - ditto
 * "He was ultimately selected in the second round, 46th overall, by the Pittsburgh Penguins." - This statement needs a reference

Professional

 * "against Ottawa Senators goalie Craig Anderson." - goaltender

Personal life

 * "Sprong remains a Dutch citizen but has applied for Canadian citizenship; as of 2015 he had still not received it." - is this still the case as of 2016?