Talk:Daniel Wellington

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Peer Review #1
The Lead Section: The lead section of this topic is very weak. There could be a better way to organize the topic like "Overview" and "Watch Styles" could be a good start.

Structure: The structure isn't quite there yet. It doesn't seem like there is enough information yet to truly establish a structure. As stated above, different topics like "overview" and "watch styles" could be a good start

Balance: There is a lot that could be added. I took a look at a larger watch brand like Michael Kors and on their page there are thigns such as net worth and information about the founder/owner. Information on Daniel Wellington could help balance the brand/person.

Neutral: The article is neutral in tone definitely. There are only about 5 or 6 sentences so that could change with some editing, but as long the trend is continued this would be good.

Reliable sources: Bloomberg and Business Insider are some of the sources that are used in this article. There are 4 total sources and these sites seem to be somewhat credible being that this is a somewhat new brand.

Pronunciation
I know that this may seem a naïve question, but is there a need to provide a pronunciation guide? I have assumed that the second word is pronounced "WELL-ing-t'n" with stress on the first syllable (as is usual in other contexts), but I met a watch shop owner who pronounced it something like "w'-LING-t'n" with stress on the second syllable (apostrophes here represent schwa). As she didn't otherwise seem to have a speech impediment, I'm guessing that she was shamefully ignorant — or else I am. —DIV (1.144.104.99 (talk) 02:33, 7 April 2019 (UTC))