Talk:Danielle Jones (EastEnders)/GA1

GA Review
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Comments by Dalejenkins
This article needs MUCH work done to it, but it could be achieved. Strike and ✅ things that have been achieved and add a comment underneath them if there's any queries. Once all this has been sorted, I'll be back to add more comments. Dalejenkins | 18:35, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Any input on this, Dale? It's been over ten days since the review was opened, and nothing can really move on without a response from you. Frickative  16:41, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
 * I left a message on Dale's talk page a couple of weeks ago asking if he intended to continue with this review, which he's now removed without response . Any thoughts on where to go from here? Frickative  18:18, 13 May 2009 (UTC)
 * I think relist. Hopefully someone who knows what they're talking about will do the review next time.  GunGagdin Moan 18:25, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

General

 * "Danielle Jones (née Amy Mitchell) is a fictional character" should be "Danielle Jones (née Amy Mitchell) was a fictional character"
 * I'm afraid I disagree with this. Just because the character has left the show doesn't mean she ceases to be a fictional character from the show. AnemoneProjectors (what?) 19:19, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Danielle is and always will be a fictional character, regardless of her on-screen death. Frickative  19:28, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
 * "Weymouth" in the "Creation" section should be wikilinked and "Mitchell Week" should be in italics. Also, who dubbed it "Mitchell Week"? ✅
 * "Crace accepted the role whilst still in her third year at the Royal Academy of Dramatic Art" should be "Crace accepted the role whilst still in her third and final year at the Royal Academy of Dramatic Art" to avoid confusion ✅
 * In the "Creation" section is says "Danielle, would be introduced to EastEnders as the love interest of fellow newcomer Callum Monks...the show's producers attempted to deliberately deceive the audience into believing Danielle was nothing more than a new friend for Stacey Slater". This is a contradiction and "Stacey Slater" should be wikilinked ✅

Images

 * Keep just one of the two images of Danielle and Ronnie ✅
 * Have an image that protrays another aspect of the character's time on the programme (one of Danielle and Stacey or Callum, for instance) ✅
 * All images should be of MUCH lower quality - see Pauline Fowler ✅