Talk:Daoko

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This article is kind of a mess
I've never really edited Wikipedia, but this article needs work.

The word famed seems somewhat subjective and isn't backed up by a citation.

"she is famed for being the singer of the music video 「ME!ME!ME! feat. daoko」"

--> "she received a large amount of attention for her vocal work in the music video 「ME!ME!ME! feat. daoko」 composed by TeddyLoid on 21 November 2014."

Note, no Wikipedia article yet exists for the music video ME!ME!ME!, so I can't link to it. I'm not sure what Wikipedia's procedures are for referencing a work like that. It's pretty obvious that the above statement is true, but I am having trouble finding a source (in English) to prove it. Either way, the article should mention her role in the video, as it's a big part of her career thus far.

"on 4th Febuary 2014 and subsequently shutted down her blog."

"She was widely praised for the her soft voice and matured lyrics contrary to her age. According to LOW HIGH WHO? PRODUCTION, her rap, singing and style is changing into more unique."

Not that the citation for these two points is a YouTube video. I assume these points have been lifted and translated from the Japanese description.

129.110.241.141 (talk) 19:13, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

lol — Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.12.80.107 (talk) 09:25, 26 May 2016 (UTC)