Talk:Dar al-Kiswa/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 20:02, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

Nominator: MartinPoulter (talk · contribs) at 13:51, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

Comments

 * Prose
 * Maybe mention "Cairo, Egypt" in the lead ✅
 * "including the kiswa, — " Our article calls it Kiswah with a 'h'. ✅
 * "At its peak," — do we know which year? ✅
 * Link 'Kaaba' in the prose. ✅
 * "plus coverings" — 'and'? ✅
 * "employing 4,000 craftsmen" — exactly or approximately? ✅
 * "At this point, it was" — "It was then" ✅
 * " the Sultan of Brunei" — s should be in lowercase per MOS:JOBTITLE ✅
 * All images look fine. Suggesting to add ALT text ✅
 * References fine.


 * Spot check
 * Spot checked Ref#3, 10, 7, and other online sources. No issues noted. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:42, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

General discussion
Hi! I'll review this article as a part of the June 2022 backlog drive. Feel free to let me know if you have any questions or need clarification for any point. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 19:56, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Extremely sorry for the delay ... doing this now. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:15, 27 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much for this review- very useful input. I've made some minor changes (marked above) and will continue to work on improvements. MartinPoulter (talk) 16:40, 27 June 2022 (UTC)
 * all requested changes have been made. MartinPoulter (talk) 10:14, 28 June 2022 (UTC)