Talk:Darius the Great/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tea with toast (talk) 19:29, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Issues needed to be addressed before final review
References are of the 8 March 2010 version


 * 1) Ref 2 is a broken link, this must be fixed, or a new source found
 * 2) I am skeptical of ref 4, which refers to the book " Classic Biblical Baby Names: Timeless Names for Modern Parents". I find that such a book is not suitable for the standards of an encyclopedia. I am also doubtful that it supports the text "The generous funding of the temple gave Darius and his successors the support of the Jewish priesthood." Is there not a more appropriate source to support that sentence?

I will place this review "On hold" until the first issue is resolved and the second issue is either resolved or explained here. --Tea with toast (talk) 01:42, 9 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Understood, worked on the issues. Are they fixed? Thanks for providing me with the extra time I requested. warrior  4321   05:42, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking care of these details. Since you found two other refs to support the statement made in #2, I think the "Baby names" book referenced should be removed entirely. Additionally, the list of book references should be alphabetized by author. --Tea with toast (talk) 17:13, 21 March 2010 (UTC)

Article assessment
I find that this article meets the good article criteria:
 * 1) The article is well written.
 * 2) The article is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * 3) The article addresses the main topics in an appropriate level of detail.
 * 4) The article is not biased and is written in a neutral.
 * 5) The article is stable and is not undergoing an edit war.
 * 6) The article contains suitable images with appropriate captions.

--Tea with toast (talk) 17:13, 21 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Thanks a lot for the review! I am glad that this has passed GA. I will work towards making it FA, thanks again! warrior  4321   17:39, 21 March 2010 (UTC)