Talk:Dark Horse (George Harrison song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Paul MacDermott (talk · contribs) 12:19, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

I'm happy to take this one on. I'll read through it in the next few days then check it against the review checklist. As ever I'll request a second opinion for images and punctuation. Cheers Paul MacDermott (talk) (disclaimer) 12:19, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Ah that's great news. Thanks, Paul MacDermott. JG66 (talk) 16:04, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

Initial read through

On a first pass this looks like great work; well-written and well-referenced, and I suspect it would have a very good chance at FAC. The only point I would make is about the reasons for Harrison writing the song. You say "Harrison wrote "Dark Horse" in 1973, apparently as a rebuttal to critics of Living in the Material World, or as a message of defiance to Boyd, or both." Is it possible to be more specific about who put forward these theories?

Checklist criteria

Comments Overall I think this is a well-written and sourced article. Because I read it through text-to-speech software I'd like a second opinion on things such as punctuation and images just to check that they're ok, but as long as there's no problem then I'll pass this. Paul MacDermott (talk) 19:31, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, Paul MacDermott. Yes, I'd been re-reading the article recently and, like you, semi-stumbled over the mention of "Harrison wrote "Dark Horse" in 1973, apparently as a rebuttal ... or ... or both" – I'll definitely revisit that point in the text very soon. Big, big thanks once again. JG66 (talk) 03:00, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Hi again. All done now, I believe. JG66 (talk) 07:43, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Took a look through per above and don't see any issues punctuation wise. Wizardman  05:39, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Cheers, Wizardman, I'll close this up then. Paul MacDermott (talk) 14:48, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Fantastic. Thanks so much, Paul – and to you Wizardman, for stepping in there. Cheers, JG66 (talk) 11:51, 2 February 2013 (UTC)