Talk:Darryl Milburn/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 17:52, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 17:52, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 18:37, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I copyedited the article here. Let me know if you disagree with any edits.
 * He was able to increase his size to 6 ft 5 in, 264 lb, the way this is written, it makes it seem like he made himself grow longer. Maybe rerword to say he increase his weight to 264 lbs while also growing 2 inches in height?
 * You can link Dispersal draft.
 * Ref spot checks: 3, 5, 7, 8, 13, 17, 19, 22, 24, 31
 * I've addressed the issues. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:42, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Pass. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 19:44, 25 August 2023 (UTC)