Talk:Daryn Hinton

Article needs cleanup
The article is written by a resume. At first glance it appears well-cited, but many of the links don't mention Mz. Hinton (home pages of institutions). There is also plenty of commentary that isn't encyclopedic- references to non-notable siblings, godparents of relatives, etc. The article is also poorly written and needs sections. tedder (talk) 05:50, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I can't see why you tagged it as autobiography but what you said here is true, hence GOCEreviewed (copy edit declined as article needs rewriting). --Stfg (talk) 13:40, 28 April 2012 (UTC)