Talk:Dascyllus albisella

External links modified
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 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20141221000918/http://www.fishbase.org/summary/Dascyllus-albisella.html to http://www.fishbase.org/summary/Dascyllus-albisella.html

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Plagiarism?
Hi all, I was looking to make some additions to this page as I am editing the Damselfish page, and I noticed that the writing in the paragraph within the "Behavior" section seemed a bit off. I am not sure if it is just the tone of the writer, but this seems too similar to the source articles that were cited. At the very least, this section was not written as if it were part of an encyclopedia, but rather a peer-reviewed article. For example, within this section, the contributor wrote "As we can see", "This behavior is possibly due to", "We see that", etc. This type of language seems more argumentative than is appropriate for Wikipedia. I do not think that this is intentional plagiarism, rather an inadvertent issue.

I believe that through more summarizing and paraphrasing, this section is useful to include and should therefore be edited rather than deleted. I am a student and I am new to Wikipedia so if I am mistaken in this or if there is anything else I should do to address this, please let me know! Unfortunately, at the moment I do not have time to make these edits, but if they are not done in the next couple of weeks, I will revisit this. Thanks!

MarineBiologyS (talk) 20:33, 13 December 2020 (UTC)

Foraging Behavior
I have also added a small change to the first sentence of this article to include information about foraging behavior. This could possibly be expanded upon in future edits, possibly resulting in a "Foraging" sub-header within "Behavior".

MarineBiologyS (talk) 20:37, 13 December 2020 (UTC)