Talk:Dash Rendar

Copyvio
The article still contains numerous phrases and passages that were blatantly copied from the databank, for example: "Dash did have a streak of nobility hidden beneath his chiseled good looks and muscular build" "A quintessential Corellian smuggler" "With an unlikely droid partner, LE-BO2D9...Dash flew his sopped up YT-2400 freighter, the Outrider." "His family owned RenTrans, a growing and successful shipping company in the Core Worlds."

There are many more, but there's so much violating text tied into the rest that the article needs to be purged and started over to clear out all the copied pieces. Night Gyr 00:20, 2 May 2006 (UTC)


 * OK, I just took a look at Dash's entry in the Databank. Someone seems to have blatantly copied the databank text into the article. Someone did some major edits to this a few days ago. I guess it wasn't re-writing that was done then... The Wookieepedian 01:21, 2 May 2006 (UTC)

Redirect
This is mostly in-universe plot summary, with no citations to third-party sources to establish notability. I am redirecting this to List of Star Wars characters. Please feel free to add there some of that real-world/development stuff, but only if cited to sources. --EEMIV (talk) 14:44, 13 October 2008 (UTC)